Authors Note: I wrote this story after one of Mr. Johnson's Ed Chats. This Ed Chat was about stream of consciousness and how you should just let your ideas flow. I think this is one of my better writing pieces tell me if you think so. Some of these sentences are fragments, but this is an artistic piece so I did this on purpose.
Standing beneath a large oak tree in the middle of a field. A picnic blanket beneath me. But only I am around. I can see only nothingness and feel only a kind gentle touch of angels surrounding me. I'm here for a reason. But I cannot figure it out. Who wants me to be here? Why do they want me to be here? I don't know. But I know I'm the only one who will ever know. I need to leave this field and this tree. But I don’t know how. I don’t know where to go.
Standing beneath a large oak tree in the middle of a field. A picnic blanket beneath me. But only I am around. I can see only nothingness and feel only a kind gentle touch of angels surrounding me. I'm here for a reason. But I cannot figure it out. Who wants me to be here? Why do they want me to be here? I don't know. But I know I'm the only one who will ever know. I need to leave this field and this tree. But I don’t know how. I don’t know where to go.
I start walking and still all I can see is the
long prairie grass. It starts looking
familiar. Something starts looking familiar. But why? When have I been here before? Last years
family picnic? No. In college? No. As a child? Yes. I was here as a child this
was the field behind my house! But where is my house? Is this a question that I
will ever know the answer to? I don’t know. I start thinking. Did the field get moved by god? Or did my
house simply get demolished? I need to
figure this out! But how? How do I get back home, back to my kids and my husband?
I decided to keep walking.
All of my neighbors houses were gone. But I am
positive this is the field me and my sisters use to play in on summer nights. I
see the tree that we often climbed and hung on. I choose to climb up it one more time.
Branch by branch I make my way up to the top of the tree. I look beyond the
prairie and see my town. Only I still see nobody. I climb down the tree and
walk to the town. As I get there I look
around nobody is here. All I have to comfort me is my thoughts. But all I can
think about is how to get back home. I walk and I walk for days straight but
still I see nobody.
Many weeks later . I
see something , I see everything.
Everything is white around me and I look down and see some sort of cloud when I look back up I see angels. My
journey is over. I was looking for home all along when I should have been
looking for heaven. All of my questions have been answered. I am here and from
here on I will always be here. But where
is here?
It was very detailed. I got a little confused in the last paragraph, maybe you can add more to it.
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